Pink Petal Books Week: Lex Valentine

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Does Length Matter?

What do you do when you write 55K words and someone says that's shorter than it looks? Does that mean they were so into it that the end came before they realized it? Does it mean there wasn't enough of the story for them? Does it mean I packed a lot of meaning and story into those 55K? More than most people would?

The first two Tales of the Darkworld were novella length. Oddly, each book I write in this series is longer than the last. I guess all those fans who want more just keep getting it with each subsequent book! *wink*

Fire Season is my first full length M/M novel. I found myself incredibly nervous about it. So much so that I enlisted Ethan Day and Jason Edding as betas to calm my fears. Jason was positive that my men sounded like men and not like women. Ethan had some bits of common sense and logic regarding men that made the light bulb go on over my head. Why didn't I think of that? The answer was simple, of course. I'm not a man who is sexually attracted to men.

I like the same stuff gay men do for the most part. The difference is that I don't mind watching those gay men together while they are so not interested in seeing me with my hottie of the moment. Yet that strange desire to see men making out is what fueled Fire Season. Fueled it to the tune of 55K instead of the 40K I thought it would go. That's a lot of words about men making out.

So is 55K too short for a story like this? Personally, I think it was just right. I told the story I had to tell in the framework that I created for this story. If I did my job right, if I vested you in my characters, you did not want it to end. I know when I read an Elizabeth Hoyt book that I feel that way. More Viscount Iddesleigh! While you might think it's a bad thing to be left wanting more, authors know it for a good thing. Because you will be back for the next book, and the one after that, and the one after that… Length only matters when you're left unsatisfied afterward.

Huh? Isn't wanting more and being left unsatisfied the same thing? Nope. You want more when it was so good you don't want it to end. Unsatisfied means you were left with unfulfilled expectations and desires and you're really not interested in having that repeated. See how easy it is to figure out what you want from men? The theory is the same for M/M novels.

For now, I'll just tease you with a taste of Fire Season. If I'm lucky, that taste won't be enough. You'll want - no, need - the whole 55K. When you're done with the whole book, feel free to email me and tell me you want more. I'll take that as a huge compliment.

Fire Season - Tales of the Darkworld Book 3
by Lex Valentine
RELEASE DATE 07/09
genre: erotic paranormal romance
length: novel
Cover art by RottNRoll Productions


Buy Link: http://www.pinkpetalbooks.com/index.php?/Lex-Valentine/Fire-Season-by-Lex-Valentine.html

Trailer: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lcg4cxhM-hA

BLURB:

Black dragon Holden Antaeus isn't looking for a mate. His life is filled with family, work, and dating. Women adore him and he's never short of offers for sex, but a relationship isn't something he's interested in. When Holden's brother Sean hires a new executive for Antaeus International, Holden's whole world, and everything he's ever believed about himself, is blown to bits. Garret Renquist is a green dragon, intelligent, witty, bi-sexual, and hot for Holden. Despite the fact that Holden is positive he's heterosexual, the moment he meets Garret, something happens inside him. What follows is a journey through stereotypes and ingrained beliefs as Holden struggles with the fact that his destined mate is a man.

EXCERPT:

Holden wanted to look over his shoulder to see Garret's reaction. He didn't. He returned to the main room of the suite and picked up his water, wandering out to the balcony to watch the sun rise. It couldn't have been more than ten minutes later that he heard a soft sound that told him Garret had joined him.


“Holden, I'm sorry.”


The softly spoken words caused Holden to release his breath on a sigh. “I am too, Garret.” He turned, his gaze caught and held by Garret's. A wave of emotion, mostly indefinable, rose within him, causing an ache in his chest.


Garret swallowed, his Adam's apple bobbing slightly. “I shouldn't have done that.”


Holden sensed Garret's discomfort, but stayed silent, waiting for him to finish. He gave the man points for holding his gaze when by rights he probably wanted to look anywhere else.


“I was angry and disappointed and confused. When Rob came on to me in the bar…” Garret broke off and swallowed again. “I didn't think you would care what I did, but that is no excuse. It's just an explanation of my motivation. I know it was wrong of me to bring him back here on the day I found you. I'm so sorry.”


It had been a long time since Holden had met someone with the level of integrity that Garret had just shown. “I'm sorry too, Garret,” he replied in a low voice. “This whole thing was such a shock. And I know that's not an excuse for my behavior. It's just an explanation.”


He smiled as he repeated Garret's words. The British man's eyes lightened as a smile curved his lips. Holden caught a glimpse of brilliant white teeth as Garret's smile flashed out and he suddenly felt sucker punched, his gut twisting with emotion. The urge to reach out and touch Garret overwhelmed him, just like the man's scent filled his senses, until all he could think about was asking him to repeat yesterday's kiss.


Garret's eyes flickered. “You realize that a lot of what you think and feel bleeds out to me now,” he murmured. “Despite your natural shielding.”


Holden sucked in a breath. “If you know what I'm thinking then just do it, Garret, 'cause the gods know I can't yet,” he said in a shaky voice, feeling his heart begin to race.


Garret took the three steps needed to bring their bodies within inches of each other. Holden began to shake a little with fear and anticipation. The first kiss had been a surprise and filled with anger on both sides. This would be their first real kiss. They both acknowledged that they were mates, and that they felt some emotion pulling at them along with a steadily growing attraction. Regardless of the previous kiss, Holden didn't know what to expect and when Garret's hand came up to wrap around the back of his neck, he stiffened a little at first. Then fire licked through his veins at the feel of Garret's warm palm on his bare skin. He shook harder.


“Don't be afraid, Holden. It's just a kiss.”


Garret's soft whisper accompanied the press of his thumb against the underside of Holden's jaw. Reflexively, he tilted his chin up and Garret's mouth came down on his. Lust swept through his body as Garret expertly parted his lips. Holden gasped a little opening his mouth wider as Garret's tongue glided easily against his own, the wet heat sending lightning bolts of desire shooting through him. This time when Garret's hips brushed his, he didn't move, letting the man press his growing erection against him. His own cock started to respond, twitching inside his shorts.



Just as Holden was about to let go and kiss Garret back, the British man broke off the kiss on a long shuddering sigh. “I think we need to go downstairs before I forget that you've never been with a man before, Holden,” he said in a shaken voice.

Pink Petal Books Week: Rita Sawyer

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A Damsel Without A Dress is #1 Romantic Comedy at All Romance Ebooks

Blurb:

Stacey agreed to be her half-sister's Maid of Honor in spite of the fact that the Best Man, Alex Brandelman, pushes all her buttons. He's a major flirt, and worse, he's decided that she's the one he wants. But an encounter with a determined spider leaves her nearly naked in the elevator and in need of rescue.

When the doors open, Alex can't believe his eyes. The woman of his dreams is standing there in her underwear! He may be playing the role of gentleman by scooping her up and taking her to his room, but there's nothing gentlemanly about his desires. With the help of his sisters, he can provide a dress for this damsel, and maybe show her that he's the best man for her.

EXCERPT:

Stacey noticed something black on a fold of her skirt and reached down to brush it off. It moved. Her hand stilled. A scream froze in her throat. A spider, the size of a quarter, crawled up her side. Her whole body trembled with fear. She knew it was irrational to be afraid of something so small, but she was. Gut-churning, scream-inducing, scared-out-of-her-wits, scared. She grabbed the skirt and gave it a hard shake, hoping the spider would fall off. It climbed higher. And faster! Damn its eight legs!

In a panic, she reached for the zipper under her arm and yanked it down. Whipping the dress to the floor, she kicked it away from her. She edged around the puddle of fabric towards the door in an attempt to get out of the way. The spider crawled into view, and she let out a little squeak. Trapped in the elevator, Stacey couldn't get away. She had to squish the spider. Knowing there was nothing else she could do, she tentatively stretched out her leg. As if it sensed her movement, the spider dashed to the right and disappeared in the fold of shiny material.

Emitting a noise part growl, part whine, she stepped on the material. The little bugger slipped out of one fold and into another and her steps became stomps, each one emphasized with a grunt. The spider obviously wasn't intimidated. It somehow managed to get on to the tip of her shoe.

“Ewww,” she squealed, waving her hands vigorously as she shook her foot. Luckily, the spider fell off.

The eight-legged beast scurried back into the pile of cloth. She resumed her stomping, harder this time. The elevator door chimed as the spider surfaced again, this time charging towards her. With one final stomp on the dress, she backed out of the doors into the hall.

“That'll teach it.” A familiar deep voice said from behind her.

Stacey spun around, coming face-to-ruggedly-handsome-face with Alex. Standing with him was a group of older people obviously waiting for the elevator.

“Good Lord!” An old woman said another chimed in with a not so whispered, “Well I never!”

“I know,” said an elderly man with a chuckle.

Stacey searched for a place to hide. Deciding Alex was her best and only option, she ducked behind him and used his body as a shield. A loud symphony of whistles had her looking over her shoulder at a group of young men coming down the hall from the other direction.

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Pink Petal Books Week: Mary Winter

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The Marksman by Mary Winter


Nanook Warriors Book 2


Erotic paranormal shape shifter romance (polar bear)


M/F (with one ménage scene)


Cover art by Valerie Tibbs


Release Date: 07/09/09


Price $4.95



Buy now: http://www.pinkpetalbooks.com/index.php?/Mary-Winter/The-Marksman-by-Mary-Winter.html

BLURB:


Cameron Sommers has always worked just past the borders of right and wrong. A military sniper, she retired to work on adventure tours, mostly in the Arctic looking for polar bears. When an accidental shooting left her shaken, she went back to the military, this time as a consultant for a European Forces General, and he's sent her to the Arctic, where she has come face-to-face with the biggest, most dangerous, and the sexiest bears she has ever known.


Kjell Tivet thinks the new sharpshooter is going to endanger the mission and get herself killed. How one curvy, sexy woman who is wicked good with a rifle can help them track down the Russian corporations dumping in the Arctic, is beyond him. But Kjell knows the mission, and he trusts his commanding officer to know what he's doing. All he needs to do is keep one hot sharp shooter safe and make sure he's not left wounded by her lethal charm.



EXCERPT:

Once inside, they shed snowsuits and protective outer clothing, silent the entire time. He reached for her and tucked her against him as they walked down the hall. To his room or hers, she wondered, and didn't have long to wait before Kjell opened the door to his room. It had been closer.


He closed the door behind him, and Cam's heart thudded. She flattened her palm against his chest, expecting him to turn and pin her against the door. He didn't. Instead, he led her to the bed, sat down, and then pulled her into his lap. Kjell ran his fingers through her hair and pulled her to him for a long, leisurely kiss.


Cam snuggled against him. Closing her eyes, she opened her mouth beneath his and invited him deeper. No walls. No barriers between them. Just her, and him, together, naked, and loving each other. That sounded so good, and until he knew the truth, she'd cling to the illusion that created.


His heavy shirt bunched beneath her hands. Curling her fingers around the olive drab fabric, she tugged at it until she freed it from his pants. A bit of fumbling and her palm flattened on his smooth, bare back. Cam gave a tiny moan.


The kiss deepened. Kjell cupped her breast, his thumb massaging her nipple. Leaning into his touch, Cam gave herself over to the magic of his hands and mouth. Though she remained clothed, each caress drew her sensual pleasure higher. For long moments, she simply kissed him, reveling in his human form, in the fact that he held her. The fact he allowed her to see him as a bear moved her. Deep inside, she knew he probably hadn't done that for any other woman.


At last their lips parted. “Kjell,” she sighed his name as she shifted on his lap.


He lay back on the bed, taking her with him. A bit of adjustment, and she straddled his lean hips. Rearing back, she pulled off her sweater and silk camisole then reached behind her to unhook her bra.


Kjell groaned as the pale blue silk fell away, leaving her torso naked. He reached for her, using both hands to cup her breasts and brush his thumbs across her nipples. Such a soft action, one that made her feel wanted and cherished. She tugged at his shirt, getting him to bend enough so she could pull it over his head. When his chest was naked, she leaned forward to press her bare breasts against his skin.


A happy sigh bubbled from the back of her throat. Cam rubbed against him, working her way down his body until her knees slid to the floor. She knelt between his legs and flipped open the buttons on his pants. Sitting back, she untied his boots. She pulled first one, then the other, off, before sliding his pants down his legs. His underwear followed until he lay there naked.


“Shouldn't you do the same?” Kjell gestured to her pants and boots.


Cam shrugged. Being dressed while he was naked put the power in her hands, and she planned to use it. She stood over him, her hands braced on either side of his hips. His cock jutted at her, thick and hard. A drop of fluid emerged from the head, and Cam lowered herself to lick it off.


Kjell groaned. He reached for her, his fingers tangling in her hair for a moment, before falling back to the mattress. “Do it. Suck me.”


His order vibrated through her body, settling low in her sex. Her clit throbbed. Her slick labia ached for his touch. Cam drew a harsh breath. She waited, wanting to draw out this moment. Her gaze caught and held his, the arousal in the vivid blue depths of his eyes making her give a little moan. Slowly, so slowly that she thought she might shatter from it, she lowered her mouth to his shaft. She covered the head with tiny licks, wanting to drive him as crazy as he did her.


Kjell held himself still, not reaching for her or clenching his fingers in the comforter. Instead, he watched her, his gaze hot enough to tighten her nipples into tiny points.


Her harsh, panting breaths echoed in the room around them. Finally, she wrapped her lips around the tip of him and took him into her mouth. The salty heat of him rested on her tongue, filling her, making her think of a deeper penetration.


Fondling his balls, Cam continued taking him until her lips rested against his base. She relaxed her throat, allowing him to just slip past, and this time, he groaned. His hips flexed and pushed him deeper.



Cam pulled back. She lost track of the motion, only knew drops of his salty essence fell onto her tongue and tasted like ambrosia in her mouth. Somehow, she had to find a way to show him how much his revelation meant to her. Not that she figured a blow job would, but it was a start, a very delicious one at that.

Pink Petal Books Week: Cheryl Dragon

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Love is Scary by Cheryl Dragon
m/m erotic contemporary romance
length: short novella

BLURB:


Ryan's brain child of an adults only haunted house with club attached is big risk…he needs Wes's genius to make it real. But when the men meet, it goes way beyond business.


Off relationships, Wes can't handle another high maintenance man half in the closet. Ryan has so much in his work life that sex only sounds good to him. When passion overflows into their common goals, love has a way of sneaking through.



Setting his sketches out on the coffee table, Wes checked the logic in his flow and it worked. His creativity took over and went all out. The vision and scope came together well.

Wes sat back on the sofa and took a deep breath. It felt great to be on a design project instead of demolishing an abandoned, or condemned, home. The creative work had dried up in the Big Easy and even building was slow.

Ryan's image crept back into his mind. Wes tried to ignore the stab of arousal. Long distance, their business plans matched up perfectly. They were on the same page and it all clicked. He should've known that'd spell trouble.

No way would Wes screw up this job by hitting on Ryan, no matter how hard Ryan stared. The chemistry was hard to ignore. Besides Wes had sworn off relationships. Ryan didn't seem like the random, or casual, sex type.

Wes's cell phone rang a Vegas tune and he grabbed it. At some point he'd given Ryan his own ring tone and Wes felt like an idiot with a crush. “Wes Taylor,” he answered like any other business call.

“It's Ryan. Too late to look at your samples?” he asked.

Wes almost said no just to keep his self-control. But business had to come first. “Never too late for me. Come over whenever you want.”

“Okay, I'll be there in ten minutes. Can I get you a coffee?” he offered.

“Nope, I'm good. See you soon.” Wes ended the call. Vegas prices were crazy. Wes had made a run to a discount store and stocked up on water, soda, beer, and snacks.

Wes straightened up the hotel room a little and grabbed himself a bottle of water. Ryan knocked on the door and Wes' stomach knotted. This high-strung ad exec with a dream somehow had gotten to Wes.

He opened the door and Ryan smiled, sexy as ever. Those hazel eyes fit Ryan perfectly, a mix of things in which someone could get lost. “Come in,” Wes said.

Ryan entered, still toting his travel mug of coffee. Wes noted that Ryan's light brown hair was a bit more mussed than earlier and his sleeves were rolled to the elbow. Just what Wes needed to see, lean muscled arms. “I've got water, beer, and soda.” Ryan had to be overdosing on the coffee now, it after eleven.

“I'm good.” Ryan sat on the sofa and looked at the sketches.

“Did you go to some fancy steakhouse for dinner with the clients?” Wes asked.

“Yeah, at the hotel the clients are staying. I didn't really eat much. These sketches are perfect.”

Wes sat down next to Ryan. “Glad you like them. I've got some leftover chicken stripes in the little fridge if you want. They're spicy.”

Ryan scooted back a few inches. “No thanks. I don't eat much in general. Coffee and work.”

“You'd never make it in New Orleans. Food and fun is our business.”

“I like New Orleans, just not a big eater. Vegas has a ton of food but I live here. I don't even notice it anymore.” He grabbed one of the sketches. “She's topless?”

Wes chuckled. “Yeah, a topless zombie blackjack dealer. I don't draw breasts a lot. The players are transfixed on her assets and when people get closer to look the players turn on them and they're disfigured. They try to pull the people in to take their places.”

“Perfect.” Ryan leaned closer.

“And there are more people who jump out from behind and guide them to the roulette wheel.” Wes inhaled Ryan's subtle aftershave and the scent of coffee. Fighting this attraction would really be impossible.

“What happens at the roulette wheel?” Ryan looked up at him.

Wes' brain stopped over-thinking things.

“People keep their hands on their bet and all the losers get their hands chopped off. You'll like the craps table. A hot naked guy lying on his stomach is the table. His back's painted and they throw dice on it.”

Ryan stiffened. “Why would I like that? It's good to have something for the women to enjoy as well. It needs to be balanced but why would I care?”

Grabbing Ryan by the shoulders, Wes suppressed a chuckle. A closet case. At least there was no pressure. “Don't worry. I'm not after a relationship. I've been screwed too many times. But you're driving me crazy.” Wes yanked Ryan's dress shirt opened and pushed him back on the couch.

Ryan held onto Wes' shoulders. “What are you doing?” he asked.

If that was his idea of fighting off a man, Wes knew he'd win in seconds. Stretching out on Ryan's lean form, Wes cupped the back of Ryan's head and pulled him closer. Wes kissed him, no finesse or subtly. He possessed Ryan's mouth.

Ryan's hands pulled on Wes' T-shirt as his mouth opened eagerly. Just sex! Wes reminded himself as the warmth of Ryan's hard body melted any resolve left. This was no club hook up.

Kissing down Ryan's lean chest, Wes could feel every muscle with his tongue as he teased Ryan's nipples and let the crisp chest hair graze his cheek. He unbuckled Ryan's belt and opened his fly over the hard cock. His boxers tented and Wes teased him through the slippery fabric.